persuasive writing

This term in literacy we have been learning about persuasive writing.

Can you litter or not? 

Imagine rubbish all over the world. How would that make you feel? My writing is going to give you reasons why people shouldn’t litter.

I think we should not litter in this world  because if we did the world would have rubbish all over the world and people would not be bothered to pick it up because there will be too much rubbish all over the world so that’s why i think that you should stop littering.

The wind would blow all the rubbish and it would go in the sea and everywhere on earth it would keep spreading everywhere and if this happens you won’t be able to stand without standing on rubbish everywhere you go.

You have to evacuate earth because there is rubbish everywhere.  And go to space until all of the rubbish is gone off earth and when it is you will have to replant trees and plants grass and stuff like that and let it grow so it can be a better environment for earth and people and what do you think about it?

And also if you stay there until all of the rubbish is gone and you will need people to clean the earth everyday until it is all clean. 

And people will get lazy and throw their rubbish on the ground and won’t stop and won’t pick it up and they will keep doing it everyday until the move. 

And they will keep on doing it until they get evacuated and they will keep doing it when they go to space too but that is what I think. 

But if you don’t litter you will be clean and healthy and you won’t get sick that many times but if you do litter you will get sick and not be clean and healthy.

                                   What do you think

 

 

Beach education

                    beach education 

 

It was Monday when we went to the beach education and we went to the surf life saving club that is were it was set up there was three woman and they told us how the boat works and it’s called I.R.B and I also got told about when the life saver was in a board competition and then I went to the next one that was the life saving pack and after that we had morning tea and went to the beach to have beach games we played this game when we went in a circle and we had partners and I play I came 4th the first round but the second round i came 3 and it was fun then we had lunch and then we got change into our toges and went in the beach water and then we run in there and out it was cold and fun then we got changed and went to say thank you to the life saving people and went to school and played on the playground.

School Year Reflection 2023

                   School Year Reflection  2023

 

This year at Rawhiti school I have been having a great time in my class making new friends and getting to know new teachers and getting to know how to swim more and I like the top team because we went around in groups and going to get wet in a hot afternoon and also the rock surfing I love surf because i’m so good at it and I also did minecraft aquarium group we put a lot of Gray and we all like it and we found out that we came first out of year 7 and there was the vr experience and there was a lot of rubbish in the sea and I think that we should stop littering so all the fish can stay alive. 

I also think that next year I should work on diving again because I forgot how to and make more friends and getting to know more people and getting included in more stuff like surfing and going on school trips even outside of school and like swimming, minecraft, VR experience and going on camps and I would like to do brain busters next year and when I leave the school I would like to be a teacher because I like being a leader so I want to become a teacher. 

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Maddie Davidson

Maddie Davidson came to our school today and told us about her and she went to Olympics And she came 10th When she was doing domestics on a trampoline she ask us how high can we jump and spin it was fun and she ask us what Our goal was my goal is to be a pro gamer and football and she Talk about she got stuck in that elevator and the elevator went down really fast and firefighters came to help her but her friend was helping her by staying calm and she got out she through the bag were the firefighters were and thin got puled out of the elevator Well holding the door open and she got out.

Lending And Dept

this term I have been learning about banqer. Banqer is an app that can help you save many we have been learning about credit card’After pay’overdraft’Debit card’hire purchase and personal loan credit card is when you pay with card  money is bank After pay is when you get an item now and pay later overdraft is when you spend more money  dham you have debit card is when your money on a card septets hire purchase it is when it is higher interest personal loan getting a lone from bank arranged to buy bank.

Week 1 reflection

this week i have learnt about Mr Redmond makes my brain goes boom and that  I learnt maori words with Sharon and with Talei I did a self-portrait   of me. what i enjoyed is being with my funny teacher and friends and being a senior

The Magic Portal

One  day Dan was walking through the forest and saw very big trees and it looked like it was there since 1900’s.  Jack came up beside me and he said come back here and you will  see a big really big tree and I went over and saw the biggest  and ginormous tree.  I said ha look it;s a Door covered in green vines and green moss.  I got my pocket knife and cut the green vines’ the door was rusty like it’s been here for thousands of years  and Jack open the door.

but it wooden open and I gave it a tug and push the door open wen  the door was open i seen a yellow shining light I thought to myself is someone  living here Jack was looking at the door like he was possessed I look behind me and Jack look back too and said what are you looking at I  heard something in the bushes behind us oh no why?  I said Jack said we didn’t  read the sign what sign? that sign the sign said if  you open the door you mast look before your eyes or else!!!

I can feel a cold soul  standing over us I looked up at Jack  and I can see red eyes looking at Jack and Jack look over at Me and he said don’t look up  I said why and I look up and me and jack got  drag to the door and got through in and the dark soul went in and the door shut in The Vines went over the door and Jack and me was never to be seen again!!!